I walk alone

by Rose not your average   Aug 9, 2007


I walk alone,
I own my own throne!
In this thing,
Called life.

To many people have hurt me.
They do not car what they do or see.
There are to many lies for me to bear.
I used to care but now I dont.

To many fakes in this world
And I am just being twirled.
Go ahead laugh,
I just clap!

Does it make you feel good?
Well it should,
But wait,
It doesnt.

I walk alone now.
I wont bring you along.
I do not know if I can trust you.
Not after what you did.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like last stanza, ending is poor but this poem is excellent. Third stanza is my favorite one. I like the topic and you created great atmosphere. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Another good poem, wonderful job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very poetic and creative lines. The second line is really beautiful and nicely ordered. I like this piece

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Very good poem...from the heart...good job

    ashleigh

  • 16 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Nice poem. I think you should read over this and fix some errors like changing the 'to' in 'to many' into 'too'. I only point that out because it makes it difficult to focus fully on the meaning behind the poem while you're reading when you're thinking of someone's errors at the same time. But besides that I liked it! :)

    --Lindsay.

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