Girlish Lies

by Goran Rahim   Aug 9, 2007


Tonight,
In her memories,
A teardrop fell on my open computer,
Wondering
Why I have no message, no email
From the beautiful girl
With hazel eyes.

Then I realized
I am fooling myself,
As there is nothing called love,
It is all girlish lies.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    This poem is so cute, I loved the emotion you put into your words, yet there were barely any. You did so great to capture the full feeling in such short writing. Great Job, I just love your work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    A short story, easy to understand for anyone who reads. Great emotional expression. The phrase, girlish lies, is rather sexist, but I guess in this case it fits for this poem considering the rest of its content. Still a great poem as always. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ItS lovelY & aN interestinG writinG....

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Short but touched the hearts of many. A sad piece, but it was lovely. I've never read a poem like this before and I like that is original. I liked your choice of words for such a short poem and I can feel how upset you are about this. 5/5.

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    Lovely choice of words and I feel where you are coming from with this one I enjoyed it very much.

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