As i say goodbye to this world i call hell

by SuicideNotes2Poems   Aug 9, 2007


Tears and blood fall to the floor
the sorrow i am feeling, i want it no more
my empty body falls to the ground
with blood running from my wrist down
my sad world falls apart
but this has happened from the start
i fall to my knees trying to pray
but i think these demons are going to stay
goodbye and goodnight
to this world of hate
in that droor the knife holds my fate
goodbye and goodnight
to this house of depression
that small Peace of metal is my only perfection
I'm leaving now say your goodbyes
i am in pain, look into my eyes
I'm leaving now don't you cry
its for the better that i leave, it will be alright
goodbye hell

Ricky

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  • 16 years ago

    by Frank the Great

    Excellent poem, well written and full of emotion. great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Hah i saw the title of this one...and i as just like hmmm...didnt realize it would say everything im feeling right now...but hey youre that awesome : )

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Beautiful poem! I really love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jade

    Wow..this poem is really amazing. your really talented. I love the emotion i felt in it. Keep at it..youve got real talent.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow...beautifully well written..penned poem..great job..very emotional..deep words yet so powerful. . . I loved it
    Take care
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    -sarah