Last Breath

by Finalgravedigger   Aug 12, 2007


Not much time left
i must tell my love the best
the joy she brings me at hand
I hope that she will understand.

You may have never returned my love
but I'll always give you a kiss or a hug
you had my heart at first site
and trust me I held on tight.

With this last day
Ill show you were the ray
the ray of light
which guided me at night.

I'll say i love you a billion times
expressing how i feel hoping to be fine
to mend my broken heart
let my soul at rest
because losing you was my only regret.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Ehh.. 2 words: BEAUTIFUL & AMAZING!!
    i loved this poem a lot. Keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    Really sad and touching poem.
    i liked it
    had many feelings =]

    xo.louii

  • 16 years ago

    by Isabelle

    I really liked this one as well. Very beautiful, and it makes me wish that my guy would care that much about me! Seriously though, this is a wonderful poem.

  • Hmmmm.... It is interesting but little pathetic, yet you wrote it wonderfully!

  • 16 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Nice poem. Lots of feeling.