Wrong Again [Reverse Etheree]

by Tammie   Aug 14, 2007


Lending my heart and putting trust in you
Telling you my thoughts, secrets and dreams
I risked it all again for you
You used to make me happy
What changed so suddenly?
I thought you were so
Different, but yet
Again I
Turned out
Wrong.

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A Reversed Etheree Consists of 10 lines with the syllables of : 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I havn't read any of your work in ages and I just noticed you had posted newer poems so I took up the opotunity to comment. I really enjoyed this piece, the poetry style is one of my favorites they really catch my interest as did this piece. I liked the emotion such as anger and also sadness you portrayed into this it was great really deep and really beautiful. I don't know why this has a 4.2 rating it deserves more. Definitly a 5/5 in my eyes. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by StarvingForPerfection

    Wow i can relate to this
    this poem is sad
    but i really love it
    good job :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Shannon Loter

    I really liked this one.
    i can totally relate to it and whatnot.
    i love that writing concept
    i think i might try it.
    keep it up :]
    <333Shannon

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    So sad and full of hurt, i'm sorry to hear that you are hurt, this was so emotional and impressively writen, with this technique it even made it more powerful.

    5/5 always, David

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