Facets of Rain

Mmmm....loved the imagery! 5/5.

I really like this one, there is much depth =]

I think my phavourite thing about this poem was that you put it under the category ov 'poems about liphe'. (Man I wish my keyboard wasn't broken. I really need the letter 'eph' phor that word.) Anyway, I read it once, and I thought that maybe you had accidentally stuck it under the wrong category, because I tend to avoid commenting on the poems about nature or anything like that. I personally, as a reader and a writer, lean toward the emotional side ov things, and I don't quite phind it as easy to get lost in a poem about something that I can see everyday outside my window. Though, your poem was so much more than just the storm. It had the pheeling that I like to read, and it was relateable to anybody. Happy or sad, in love or heartbroken, this poem was about the rain coming phor the bad and the good.... Now that that's been said, I really hope that I took phrom this poem everything I should've. The meaning did seem quite simple and easy to read, but I've made mistakes bephore.
I don't have much to say about it, as it was a nice and easy read; but part ov me misses the rhythm you held in your other work. Your use ov words and imagery still amazes me though, and I can only give you kudos once again.
I wish I could give you more constructive criticism, but I like your writing. Keep it up!

The first sentence of this poem was the best and really intriuged me to read on. Loved the use of language again xxx alex xxx

I like the structure of your poems.. YOu put this piece together well. flawless,,,,,

5/5