Not noticed

by Meme   Aug 20, 2007


Every time I go there
They leave me all alone
They act like am invisible
Or am hiding in a black zone

I slowly pull myself out
And try my best not to cry
They pretend I was never there
And not once they asked why

Again they decide to gather
But this time I refuse to go
No matter how much they insist
The only word I have is NO!!

After that I see them once again
And this time they want to talk
But all they have are reprimands
They start throwing them like rocks

They never stopped and asked
Why do I behave this way?
They only know how to blame
And never give you a chance to say

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© Copyright 2007 by: gIrL
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  • 14 years ago

    by Nevi

    This poem really communicated emotion well. and again, I felt like it spoke to me. amazing. you're quite the poet

  • 17 years ago

    by Fire Catches

    This is exactly how I feel..
    Me and my twin sister are left in the dark
    While my older sister gets speaical treatment!
    & my parents dnt even care that were hurting while my older sister gets away with what she does! but when it comes down to us, its no!
    Great poem! everything went together
    and i know how hard it is too!
    Just to be invisable, then noticed when someone wants something!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    It was such a sad poem. And it made me sad too. Exccelent piece of work. I think i found alot of pains and sad feelings in your poem. The choosen of words was so simple and easy to read for anyone. Well done. You deserve more than 5. Keep it up. You are talented.

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    It was such a sad poem. And it made me sad too. Exccelent piece of work. I think i found alot of pains and sad feelings in your poem. The choosen of words was so simple and easy to read for anyone. Well done. You deserve more than 5. Keep it up. You are talented.

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    To say,
    that your not that cold,
    and your tears are like forzen rain,
    every time they fall they bring you pain,
    trust me i know your felling to be forever left out,
    and when not found your the only one sought out,
    the world is not fair so what do we try so hard
    i know why beacuse no one ever wants to be so alone.

    i love it 5/5
    i hope i can read more so firmilyer

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