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This poem really communicated emotion well. and again, I felt like it spoke to me. amazing. you're quite the poet

This is exactly how I feel..
Me and my twin sister are left in the dark
While my older sister gets speaical treatment!
& my parents dnt even care that were hurting while my older sister gets away with what she does! but when it comes down to us, its no!
Great poem! everything went together
and i know how hard it is too!
Just to be invisable, then noticed when someone wants something!
5/5

It was such a sad poem. And it made me sad too. Exccelent piece of work. I think i found alot of pains and sad feelings in your poem. The choosen of words was so simple and easy to read for anyone. Well done. You deserve more than 5. Keep it up. You are talented.

It was such a sad poem. And it made me sad too. Exccelent piece of work. I think i found alot of pains and sad feelings in your poem. The choosen of words was so simple and easy to read for anyone. Well done. You deserve more than 5. Keep it up. You are talented.

To say,
that your not that cold,
and your tears are like forzen rain,
every time they fall they bring you pain,
trust me i know your felling to be forever left out,
and when not found your the only one sought out,
the world is not fair so what do we try so hard
i know why beacuse no one ever wants to be so alone.

i love it 5/5
i hope i can read more so firmilyer