Burning Tears (Collab)

by End Of Eternity   Aug 21, 2007


Tears burning as they fall
My soul is crying for you
Melting a path to my heart
Where love still lives so true

Memories screaming in flame
Holding your picture again
Eternity has stood still
Since you left me in pain

How do I live in darkness
Without you lighting my way
Fading images haunting my life
When I turned and left that day

Hiding beneath tide of misery
Waiting to be swept away
Drowning waves of broken dreams
Never your love would I betray

Will you catch me when I fall
From my cliff of sorrow
Need your love to continue living
Without you time is borrowed

Written by: End Of Eternity
Cynthia Graver
Aug 21, 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by KrypticKristen

    Haven't read your stuff in a while but it was amazing, just as i remembered and knew it would be.

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Tears burning as they fall
    My soul is crying for you
    Melting a path to my heart
    Where love still lives so true

    Love the opening stanza. Somehow I can feel each and every single line of this poem. While I was reading it, I got a punch in my guts, I guess you brought back some concealed memories.

    Beautifully written.

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Amazing, and dark..yet again, more comments above that I could only repeat.. 'Nuff said. Very well done. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Amazing poem!!! i love the structure of this poem and the way you worded things....your an excelltn writer...look forward to reading more!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nitin, wondeful to see another collab from you and Cindy. This one is so beautiful and sad....emotions are heartfelt and deep....perfect flow and blending of styles to effortlessly transition from one verse to the next....well done! Debbie

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