Reflection

by Wake   Aug 28, 2007


A different image i see
i see somethings out of place.
A broken heart has slipped
on the other side of the mirror today.

Betrayal , Rejection
Deceptive affections
Failed perceptions
of unwise suggestions.

The reflection is alone now,
with no-one to hold it
Bottled up all the pain and kept it
sealed up and bolted.

Emotion dejection.
Distorted projection
The only connection
is the broken reflection

In a crimson flash
the image slipped away.
And next to an empty screen

left me to fray...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Great ending and whole poem is very original, you wrote it superbly. I like the topic, very touching piece. Every stanza is so powerful and emotional and wording is excellent!

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really good poem. 5/5

    amandaxx. rawr! =]]

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, truly greatly written, with powerful imagery and superb wording. I think that you should capitalize I in the first stanza, that is the only mistake in the poem.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -Betrayal , Rejection
    Deceptive affections
    Failed perceptions
    of unwise suggestions.-
    Whole piece is very unique, too.
    Keep up, 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    A-maz-ing!
    Luv Luv Luved it.

    And thanks mucho much for all ur comments you left me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Betrayal , Rejection
    Deceptive affections
    Failed perceptions
    of unwise suggestions.

    Emotion dejection.
    Distorted projection
    The only connection
    is the broken reflection

    These two stanzas are phenominal... You make the words fit together like Heaven and God. Dont stop writing!
    5/5
    **Heather**

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