Blackened by a golden heart

by Lithium   Sep 4, 2007


An undefined romance,
Blacked by a golden heart,
Worn out from love,
Each limb was torn apart,

Each guitar string you played,
With the note upon your fingertip,
A tear begins to fall,
Reminiscing your soft lips,

My memories are still consumed,
For all I did for you,
A love gone unacknowledged,
A golden heart turned blue,

Seeing you walk across the sea,
Further from my arms,
I cry sometimes without you here,
As does the ocean with all its charms,

Since you've been gone,
It hasn't been the same,
The light fades to dark,
Growing in ashes from this flame,

Each cut you made me feel,
Every scar you left behind,
Will guide me through eternity,
As a lover who became blind,

It's hard to say how I feel,
As these years passed us by,
Your presence pierces my mind
Even through my mid July,

Still your ghost haunts my dreams,
Enters my soul, takes life from me,
And each time you ride away,
I know I'm no longer free.

Wrote on September 4th, 2007
© Samantha Jayne Reed

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Filled with so much heartache.... the choice of words were beautiful and made for a wonderful read, rhyme and flow was perfect... a beautifully sad write!

  • 16 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    Amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Wowowowow..this was so deep and painfully written.. i cn feel it.. the energy flowing from this..WOW..and yes,Very relatable.
    amazingly penned.

    "..Seeing you walk across the sea,
    Further from my arms,
    I cry sometimes without you here,
    As does the ocean with all its charms.."

    =']

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    What an awesome piece you have penned. This is really beautiful yet so sad.

    Still your ghost haunts my dreams,
    Enters my soul, takes life from me,
    And each time you ride away,
    I know I'm no longer free.

    Love you ending. Worth waiting for :)
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Samantha, this is truly superb poem so intense and so heartfelt, each line is panited with true emotions.Loved it, its simply amazing.

    Take care
    chavii.