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Dont give up on love whatever you do, it will always be there even if you dont want it ,it will always find a way. you know its love if it makes you happy insde and out.

Ok good i like it tri to smile for some reason i like poems that talk about criing and cutting

Hehehe.. cute, it flowed so naturally... honest.. um..

awsome, i think u found ur self and also u know wat you want.

Good piece Ali... never lose hope you will often find things when u least expect them to come along..

Well said. We can't give up hope on love, but sometimes it seems that when we stop searching, it finds us instead. I like your free verse style.
*ME*