Soul Gazer

by NyellMoonlight   Sep 7, 2007


Azure shadows filled the head,
on the moon's top we danced,
smiling with the shiniest stars
in the orbits of this liquid world.

Guarding some unsaid thoughts
lyrical motions locked inside,
melody of the silver bells cringed
in front of our alluring masks.

Whole picture's framed with waves,
ebbs and tides of the entwined auras,
beckoning a few lost pieces colored
in whole spectrum of dream's hues.

Patchwork moments tainted souls,
complex yet fragile, cosmically defined;
I see all that as I gaze into your eyes,
the reality's not enough, so blank and gray.

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  • 15 years ago

    by DJ

    Awesome vocab portrayed in all of your poems... very imaginative.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Excellent and powerful. Another thought provoking write that absorbed my attention to the fullest. It flowed nicely and was very interesting. I loved the final stanza, it gave me chills and I dont knoow why haha. Im a looney pea..sorry but this was pure perfection girl!

  • 16 years ago

    by DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror

    AND first stanza is, oh my, even beauty of devil can't compare with amazing atmosphere of it.

  • 16 years ago

    by DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror

    Ending is very powerful and whole poem is wonderful!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh yeah, another wonderfully written piece. You're a really talented writter. You really have a good word choice, keep it up. I think your poems have all the poetic essence in it. Good job.

    5/5 as always.

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