Goodbye

by Hollow Emotion   Sep 15, 2007


I don't know what I did
for it to ever get this far,
how could it just end
like a street racing car,
I tried the best I could
to try to make you stay,
but I guess your heart
went the other way,
I really wish I knew
what I could do to make it right,
and we wont end up
in a heart breaking fight,
I gave you my heart
the day I looked in your eyes,
but then you ripped it in half
and said your goodbyes.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MizzCici

    I feel u on diz poem to sda fullest!!!!really good work!!!!!!i kno jus wat u mean!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great job on expressing your heartfelt feelings , love is the one thing that no one has ever figured out , we just learn to accept as it is and learn from it, it hurts like crap, especially when you love someone , but they don't love back, give it time things will get better , I promise, you still have all your life to find that special someone that will change your life forever , it took me42 years and I found angel and I wouldn't take all the gold in the world for her, keep writing it helps, thanks for ssharing , your friend Tracy d 5/5

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