Self Murder

by Solus   Sep 16, 2007


All the good I did doesn't seem to have mattered.
Everything I ever wanted is lost and shattered.

Hope is gone.

Love is dead.

Faith is taken.

Still I tried despite the dark madness he Injected.
Its power so strong that I can't be saved or protected.

I trust no one...

I see my tears...

I hide all alone...

Cursed with darkness, deep fears and haunted sorrow.
Pain so intense that I don't want to live another marrow.

Push away the feelings.

Remove your wounded soul.

Lock the clouded mind.

Running out of life, nothing left for me in this hell.
Murdering myself to escape this macabre cell.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    You are an excellent poet, I just wish you could write something with some brightness to it. Are you lonely or alone. The joy of the Lord is your strength.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ocean Soul

    Powerful words and emotions, a great flow, a masterpiece. As I was reading it I felt a chill running up my spine.
    You're such a poet
    Keep them coming....

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    You are a very respectable writer with powerful words that is hard to explain. You put so much emotion in your words. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    In some ways the word choice is cliche and predictable, but from your high standard of writing it feels like you did this on purpose. Perhaps to illustrate this scenario is hopeless and cliche and oh too likely to happen again, also it could add to the desperation of the person in the poem.

    a great piece and i liked the structure and layout.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, truly powerful and effective piece. Whole poem is greatly written. I can relate to some parts of it, you expressed emotions very good. The atmosphere of this piece is filled with sadness, greatly created.
    Well done, 5/5 from me :)
    Keep up!

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