My Darkest Storm

by Lisa   Sep 20, 2007


Black as night
Cold as ice
Summer sun fading
Who turned out the light

The storm rolls in
Here comes the pain
Goodbye sun
Hello rain

Growing with destruction
Tearing all things apart
Stuck in it's path
Is my trembling heart

The storm takes it now
Throws it around
I wish it would end
Pieces shatter to the ground

Now I get ready
To lay down and die
But a glimpse of sunlight
I catch in the sky

I can't give up now
I'll give it my all
It won't be easy
I can't let myself fall

In disbelief
I watch it all crash
But I realize someday
This storm shall pass

You are the storm
That will break me no longer
So I'd like to say Thank you
For making me stronger

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I LOVE IT.
    oh my god.
    This just made you like my most favorite person.
    It's orginal, but in a good way.
    So amazingly .. perfect.
    There weren't any punctuation marks, but who cares, eh. Lol.

    I loved it.
    100% amazing.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Good!

    i love your title so much

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Great poem..I really liked it. The flow was really good and everything seemed to fit. I liked how you described the storm being an obstacle at first but eventually it became a motivator and made you stronger. I really liked the metaphor and the emotion was felt. Keep up the great work.

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