The Middle Of Everything.

by Teria   Sep 20, 2007


The Middle Of Everything.

Sparks of blood fly through the air,
swiftly making the sun go bare.
No light to show, show the way.
No hope to let, let her pray.

Burdens have lifted her soul too high,
and her minds been wasted in a rubbish lie.
With power that's faded deep within,
this childs been shaken, never to win.

In the middle of everything she sits all alone,
while she looks at her bed, on the molded stone.
Her thoughts but a course that form but a square,
leaving her soul not a thing to care.

It's just getting worse the life she lives,
with nothing to recieve and even less to give.
She watched herself die right before her eyes.
She watched herself bleed and let out horrid cries..

She can picture it now, the nightmare of death..
Since, she's now all alone, not a thing left.
In the middle of everything she sits all alone..
while awaiting the help and living on stone

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  • 16 years ago

    by BeLLa

    I love this poem
    it flows great
    good job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    This is absolutely perfect! the words && the flow were great! it was full of emotion and it was just perfect all together...5/5 from me, again! keep it up!

    Jenna

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    I absolutely love this one. It was very sad and familiar. again, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    i can feel the sadness, every lines were filled by emotions. the whole thing is made of sad experiences..same as the others it rhymes so well..so it flowed out right again..

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    I really liked this poem, it has a lot of emotion within. The flow and the structure where both good. And your wording was excellent. Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe