Her Last Words

by BeautifulDisaster   Jul 31, 2007


{this poem means a lot to me. its the dream, well i guess nightmare, ive been having since the begining of the summer of 2007.}

Everything had been going great,
For them that is.

They were madly in love,
Nothing could have stopped them.

Untill that one night,
He was acting strange.

But every time she asked him what was wrong,
He insisted everything was great.

Then there was a silence,
A silence that could break a mirror.

Out of no-where he said,
They had to talk.

Before she could answer,
He went straight to the point.

He told her him and his ex,
Were thinking of getting back together.

But that it could only happen,
If there were no distractions.

That's when she got scared,
Thinking he was going to hurt her again.

So she silently whispered,
What's going to happen to us.

He said he was really sorry,
And that he did truly love her.

She stood up quickly,
And said what's that suppose to mean.

While reaching into his pocket,
He slowly and softly whispered.

I'm really sorry babe,
But this is how it has to be.

Within the blink of an eye,
She was silent.

She was lying on the floor,
With a knife through her chest.

He set it up like a suicide,
While crying every second.

As he walked down the stairs,
Her parents asked him why he was crying.

He simply stated,
She broke up with me.

He walked out the door,
Knowing he had done the wrong thing.

Her parents found her the next morning,
And just wondered why she had done it.

But most of all,
They wanted to know what her last words were.

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  • Wow, this is seriousky a great poem. It even gave me goosebumps. It's really great. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Very sad and very good people do do this and alot of the time it isnt noticed very cute 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    This poem is so sad. And I feel like strangling that guy. Poor girl. Anyway, this was a nice poem. Very deep, heart-rending and tragic. 5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well I like the ending of it.. Flow was okay, i really like the 'couplet style' well done.

    Just a suggestion to try to add 'feelings' in the poem.

    Keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    That was incredibly deep. I loved it. It was so sad . The way it flowed was great, and the way it was worded added to the emotion. IT was great