How Much You Miss Her

by Goran Rahim   Sep 25, 2007


Tonight I called my pen
To write some words for you.
The pen ran toward me
Knowing how much I love you

I wanted to write
What you mean to me
But the pen refused it saying
That one, already you can see.

Then I tried to write
I cannot live without you
Yet the pen refused it saying
She feels the same about you.

At last I asked the pen
Then what can I write her?
The pen answered me
Just say how much you miss her.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Now this is what i call a blockbuster... how do you manage to write such epics.... funtastic.... 5/5... kudos....

  • 16 years ago

    by mrhope

    Love always make us to do something that our special like and this is a prove.

  • 16 years ago

    by Emily E Mehigan

    This poem is different. i like the personification used in this poem. Nice job.<3Emily

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Omg this one was so cute! i loved it!! it's so unique and different, it's amazing i loved it goran. i hope she gets to read this, b/c i know it'll make her feel amazing, and just so loved. it's always a great heartbreak to miss someone you love so dearly, but it's a great joy when they're finally back in your arms again, it makes you feel like all the times you were alone and missing them was completley worth it. i'm happy for you! beautiful poem, keep that pen writing!

    Mousie

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    ^_^ so true every word of it. Dast Xosh

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