Mermaid (acrostic) (contest)

This was good but not your best I think you could have done alot to this but you gave a little better luck next time Plot121

Wow, this is one truly enchanting acrostic poem! I usually don't read poems about nature but this one really got my attention from the beginning to the end. You have beautiful atmosphere in the whole poem, and your descriptions are very good.
Captivating and original piece.
Keep writing, you have a way with words!

Beautiful.
acrostic poems are so very difficult because of how restricting they are.
this is brilliant what you have done
5.5
grats

"question believe?"
^^ Though, I completely understand what that is saying, I don't quite like how it's worded.

Other than that I quite like this poem.
We had this topic the other day in school. Haha.

I love mermaids. (:
Good question as well, darling.
Keep it up.

The only thing that threw me off with this peom was the use of beauty or beauties so much it kind of made the flow a little off balance. The topic again was great fantasy enjoyed that of it. Good style although I'm not quite the fan of them but if you can pull them off then well done. An enjoyable read. Keep up the good work~Mel