La Vie boheme 'The Bohemian Life' (contest)

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Oct 2, 2007


Laying on the grass; head facing the sky,
His arm wraps me tightly, as clouds pass us by.

The whistles of the wind, wrap a blanket of love.
This is the angel, who was sent from above.

Obscure wonders, a life full of beauty.
The images of nature, sounds of bluest seas.

Birds they are humming, their merry morning tune
Wildlife shows purity, flowers start to bloom.

I lean over him, the purest of nature I've seen,
Speaking in my head, 'La Vie Boheme'.

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  • 16 years ago

    by the simple girl

    Ohh love the move/musical Rent. Love Love Love. I love your rhyming. And just the way you put everything. I just find it relaxing.

    ~Ashley

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was very whimsical and was heart felt there were places that it seemed choppy but over all a good write. Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    This poem confused me just a bit

    *yells*
    background check please

    i want to know what or who (no names needed) inspired you to write this
    might help

    i though i was good but confusing. sorry

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Nice poem i love the ryhming on this piece...sorry for late vote and comment...5/5 ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    A beautiful piece of poetry. The imagery was so vivid, I could picture everything in my mind. The flow was flawless and your word usage was magnificent.

    "The whistles of the wind, wrap a blanket of love.
    This is the angel, who was sent from above."

    ^ Simply beautiful. A lovely write. Overall: 5.5 :]]

    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.

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