Our love was wrong but it was destined

by CODACHROME   Oct 9, 2007


You put a wall between us
cause our love become so strong
I knew I couldn't have you
Our love oh it was wrong

you put a wall between us
so you wouldn't see me cry
but hunny should I tell you
you'll have to watch me die

you put a wall between us
cause you hated the site of tears
but baby should you find out
you helped me faced my fears

you put a wall between us
cause our love just couldn't last
I feel it and I need it
but baby I will forget our past

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Great poem.I could really feel the emotions in it.The ryhming was simple yet it fit the poem very nicely.A very enjoyable read.A 5/5.

    'you put a wall between us
    so you wouldn't see me cry
    but hunny should I tell you
    you'll have to watch me die'

    ^^ my favorite stanza =)

    Keep writing,
    Miranda

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I really liked this poem. It showed a lot of emotion which was good. I liked the repeating line. It threw a nice twist on the poem. You might want to consider punctuation so everyone reads it the way you want them to.
    5/5

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