Waiting

by CODACHROME   Oct 16, 2007


I'm sitting on my bed
waiting for that call
hoping u would come back
to catch me when I fall

I'm sitting by my window
watching u from above
waiting for ur answer
whether or not its love

I'm sitting in the kitchen
waiting for the bell
for you to come and see me
so I can show you that I fell

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  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    If it's about waiting i can tell more about it...
    very nice poem, i liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    A common scenario and a common poem.. actually in short it sound so cliche but u still manage to bring it up in your style that made it a very nice piece.. short but a direct poem, easy to comprehend and easy to relate with. although it'
    short, you still managed to unleashed the right emotion in each lines. good work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by ShAnEL

    Nice work...i gave u a 5/5

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