Take Me or Leave Me

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Oct 10, 2007


I can see from the look in your eyes,
That I`m not at all what you want,
So your smile just boasts your lies,
Of what you`re deathly afraid to flaunt.

Telling your friends that I`m oh so pretty,
And that I`m way better than all the rest,
It`s funny, `cuz you can`t even take me,
If I`m not perfectly done up and dressed.

My clothes aren`t suiting your taste,
And my make`up isn`t just right,
I don`t have a small enough of a waist,
So we can`t leave the house tonight.

We`ll sit at home in this petty silence,
Trying to find something we can do,
My vulnerability isn`t hard to convince,
That we can be risky, try something new.

So we play a game straight from the heart,
Where we take the time to really talk,
And I tell you it straight, right from the start,
I can see it in your eyes that you`re in shock.

You thought you treated me just right,
That you weren`t capable of doing wrong,
And I have to say that up until tonight,
Your pride was standing tall and strong.

But for once, I`d like you to hold my hand,
And introduce to me to every friend you see,
Then maybe you will start to understand,
You either got to take me or leave me.

-Jenna Elphick
October 9, 2007

[[Not my best, I know.]]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Not your best?
    oh that hurts... its not ur best and still its a billion times better than my best. =( great write 5/5
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It's a great idea for a poem and ends different then expected. i enjoyed this one a lot for it's message. Good to see you do another rhyming poem!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is another great poem jenna, the flow is perfect, i give it 5/5!!!! 5 more to 500!!!