The one i love

by OMGdanielle   Oct 14, 2007


The touch of your skin
catapults me to the sky,
into the heavens
amongst the stars,
round the moon and back
back into your arms where i belong.
right now, just the sound of your voice
could bring me to tears, i know it.
you're what i think of;;
before i make a decision.
you told me I'm the one one left;;
the only one who holds you up through rocky times;;
stays by your side when everything is going wrong.
i cannot be perfect, I'm nowhere near and you know it.
i learn from my mistakes and forgive you for yours.
I'm here for you when you fall.
you promised me your love,
and I've promised you mine.
all we can do is try...
i swear i will.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    Beautiful!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Great stuff. Like it!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow great work!
    i loved it
    keep it up:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww so adoreble! Cute love poem, like never could get enough of them!
    However, could feel how you just wrote the emotions out of yourself and I just love that. Also, that it didn't ryhme. Beautiful wording, and a great imagery, even though it was about the emotion more.
    Ahh just so cute!
    Very enjoyful to read, and I can easyly relate to it:)
    5/5 Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i loved this, it was amazing. the words you used were awesome and it made the poem. i loved it so much, it is in my faves. 5/5

    nikki

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