Steve

by OMGdanielle   Oct 12, 2007


It seems like so long ago
when i first saw your brown eyes
when i first felt your lips
when you first wiped away my tears
seems like so long ago
that i drank myself into a stupor
because the one i loved, you, had strayed.
even longer ago
when you came back
told me you needed me in your life
and we struggled to make this work
however, twas only about a month ago
when you told me you couldn't live without me,
that you love me,
that you wanted to marry me.
and it seems like so long ago
that i said yes.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    Omg, brought me tears!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Aleesha

    I like it a lot, its really good. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Miu

    Awww so cute one! A beautiful story, and readers could only imagen how much this poem meens to you. Must be very very special for you. I really like it also because It is based on pure feelings. So like really really good!
    Amazing piece! 5/5 Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Short and sweet! omg i totally love it hunnn! you should totally give this to him!!! =]

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    It was such a sweet poem. i loved every word of it. the poem was simple but great. loved the structure. 5/5

    nikki

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