Dont Speak (contest)

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Oct 21, 2007


Sitting; Admiring an angel.
An extreme triumph for god,
Watching him dress himself slowly
Floating on a high of love.

Crouches down; Knee level.
A soft kiss upon my head
Steps back up, level with heaven
Stares into my eyes as he joins me in bed.

Whisked of my feet from butterflies,
Right arm wraps me up tight.
Leans over to my face,
The most pleasant experience in life.

Repetitively kissing velvet lips upon mine.
Hand massages my face
Blue eyes glaring with passion
I could be in no better place.

A smile enlightens my world,
Your heartbeat making mine weak.
Beginning to talk i put my hand on your mouth,
'Shh, my love don't speak'.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Shumz R Khan

    Gr8 wOrk... :)

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    This is a beautiful peice i love the imagery and its a really unique form of writing great work :) 5/5

    --emz--

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    I simply love this piece, right from the start it jumps out at you and stands aside from any other poem of this type. I think the imagery is outstanding and the idea is really unique.

    "Your heartbeat making mine weak."
    I think that sentence needs an "is" or "heartbeat's". That's a tiny thing that doesn't take the shine off this wonderful poem.

    Very nice poem.

    ~Pete.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    I didnt u could write this good, lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Aww omg that gave me chills, no wonder it's a winner this week! i'm guessing you did pretty decent in your contest. nice job i loved it, and it made me think of me and my baby. lol nice job though, it was great

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