Keep your hands off my girl! [contest]

by gack60   Nov 1, 2007


She looks so sweet,
She's so petite.

Keep your hands off my girl!

She kisses so good,
Like every girl should.

Keep your hands off my girl!

She makes my heart race,
She puts a smile on my face.

Keep your hands off my girl!

She looks so fine,
I'm glad she's all mine.

Keep your hands off my girl!

She's heaven to touch,
I love her so much,

Keep your hands off my girl!

She dresses so well,
I can't resist her smell,

Keep your hands off my girl!

She's gone away,
She'll be back some day.

Keep your hands off my girl!

She's gone for good,
She said she would.

She said "stop calling me your girl!"

She's with another guy,
I just want to die.

Now you're no longer my girl!

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  • 18 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, very powerful poem. I especially loved the ending. Great job 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie

    I really like this poem, flows very well and good ending,

  • 18 years ago

    by Pete

    First off, I'll wish you good luck for the contest - I'm sure you won't need it.

    Nice short, sharp lines in this, really puts the emphasis on the repeated line. Love the way that evolves into the "Now you're no longer my girl!"

    Lost love is a s.o.b, and I think you got the emotions through nicely in this piece.

    Keep it up.
    ~Pete.

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