Nice job and great work.. keep up the good work.. and hope u feel better
-steven

Omg i love this poem...it relates to me 100%....5/5.....omg.......im like totally just dumbfounded by it! lol i just love it! im putting it on my favorit poems list u can check it out!

Very emotional and deep, u really get the point across about what you are trying to say
it seemed to flow the whole way through
great job

5/5

Very strong, deep. I remember these feelings. Good work.

Perfect! actually i can relate about the story and there are times im in that situation.. and i do really understand all the emotions and hard feelings u had put in here.. i can feel that behind this poem was real and hope u can move on.. life is supposed to be in this story so i guess its just normal in spite all the hurts we've been through right? keep it up.. love it 5/5

actaully i put this one in my fav!

Awww, this is so sad, you did an awesome job of putting your emotions into the poem, you can feel your pain as you read it. the flow of it was a little off, but the poem was still so strong it really doesn't matter. 5/5
gabriella

Wow a great poem which is written greatly, you have done a great job, but its so sad.
you are truly talented, a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it

5/5

The peice was long, but I didn't mind it so much.
Situation is common, and many can relate to it. however nothing really stood out to me.
It was written well, I just think you can improve by broadening your vocabulary.

Still a job well done,
keep it up.
4/5 --Elly.

"my body is way to tired to feel your face."
^^ ['to' should be 'too'.]

"I know you have someone knew in your life."
^^ ['knew' should be 'new'.]

"Shes really pretty by the way, I hope you don't lie to her."
^^ ['Shes' should be an apostrophe in it.]

"I can't bare this as long as I honestly thought."
^^ [Not "bare", should be "bear".]

"you were my best friend, the one id run to."
^^ ['id' should be "I'd".]

"but I can't, its not easy."
^^ ['its' should have an apostrophe in it.]

"ill think about it once again and again."
^^ ['ill' should be "I'll".]

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Just thought I'd would help you out with some mistakes there. It's a good poem, if a little messy in places. I don't like the random capitalisations. There's no need. You can get your point across without using capitals to do so.

If it's a true poem, then I'm very sorry, and I hope things are better for you soon. :]

Nice work.

It's such a deep and full of emotions poem

i like it and its way of relating us to it

good luck
Her Guardian

This is truly and honestly a fantastic poem. You've done a great job. Keep it up. 5/5
--Jack

WOWWWWWWWWWW I could'nd stop reading and hoping for a happy ending but
thats just me. you have talent keep
putting your poems up it always feels better
after you do I KNOW CY

Excellent poem. very detailed and i can feel the emotion when i read it. and i feel your pain through your words in the poem. keep writing

Very powerful ending .. but i wudve liked better descriptions in the beginning.. but all in all an intruiging read .. liked it .. kudos ...

I feel exacatlly what this poem states wow its amazing....So deep and beautifully written...Great job Katlynn 5/5

I can relate tothis its like I went out with boy who i knew where liars but they just wasn't ask much liars as my other choices as of course it didn't last but great poem I love It I should send It to my ex's lol
{{keep writing more and more great poems}}

Wow another great poem......keep it up!

Another great poem of yours. I felt every feeling coming out of this. You did a great job with explaining the feeling. I absolutely loved it. 5/5

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And another amazing poem, wow I really liked this one too. Something I'm sure most people can relate to at some point or other. Good choice of words. I noticed a mistake on the line

I know you have someone knew in your life.

apart from that though, a really good read, well done