Your Smile (* _ *)

by Sweet lig   Nov 5, 2007


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Your Smile is the biggest gift on me,
And nothings so precious but...
A wonderful smile of yours!

Your Smile makes my day complete,
And my life a bit hard but...
Take a simple smile for everything!

Your Smile brings my whole life,
To live more and more each day;
And reminds me how life is colorful!

Your Smile such great to look up and gaze,
And keep on reminding me,
All the beautiful things around me!

...with your smile

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  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Just reading the title I'm sure makes everybody think of the one they love, I know I sure did right away. Nothing is more amazing to me then the way she looks at me. Great work - very heartfelt and true - 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    WOW! this one is the exact way i fell for some one right now. this one is awesome if i could give you a 10/5 i would.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    The flow here is a little broken. There are some mistakes here and there. The subject of the smile is one that I can connect too, as I feel the same for the smile of my love one. nice job 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This is a really sweet poem. I loved it!!! 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww what a cute poem!
    I could totally relate because smiles from the one I love make my day complete also.
    Well done *5/5*

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