Beneath the stars (Monchielle)

by Steven Beesley   Nov 7, 2007


Beneath the stars (A sensual poem)

Rose petals in the wind
Sweet scent flows in the air
Pastel colors dancing
So much joy in my heart
A time for romancing

Rose petals in the wind
Such beauty, heaven sent
Transfixed upon your gaze
Never to turn away
Caught within Cupid's maze

Rose petals in the wind
Nights of satin and silk
Fill my head with these dreams
Time will stand still tonight
Heart races to extremes

Rose petals in the wind
Hoping dawn stays away
This special night is ours
Within my arms you sleep
Here underneath the stars

Steven Beesley © 7th November, 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    This is an amazing piece! the last stanza is so beautiful, especially the line "Hoping dawn stays away"

    great work, once again!
    peace
    shobhana

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    This is the second Monchielle I have read. I have to say that I really like this style of poetry. Yours flowed effortlessly and the wording was sublime. The images you have created are beautiful. A lovely piece.

    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I've fallen in love with this form....thanks so much for posting it. This is a lovely and romantic poem.....you can't go wrong with rose petals....beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Steve,

    This truly is a very romantic poem, you did great!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Steve
    This is a wonderful piece you have penned. You can feel the longing and passion in your words.

    Rose petals in the wind (A)
    Hoping dawn stays away (k)
    This special night is ours (l)
    Within my arms you sleep (m)
    Here underneath the stars (l)

    This paints such a loving vision.
    Excellent job my friend.
    Love Cindy

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