Chained is my soul (Lento)

Wishing to hold you so near
Singing my sweet chant of love
Reaching out for you in my dreams
longing for you, my sweet turtle dove

fav lines, you so totally rock! 5/5 david

Beautifully penned....what wonderful sentiments. Anyone would love to be the object of such emotion.

Wishing to hold you so near
Singing my sweet chant of love
Reaching out for you in my dreams
longing for you, my sweet turtle dove

I agree, this is a cute poem. Everybody longs and dreams of being with people that they love. Sometimes we get lucky and it all comes true:) A really nice poem.

Take Care.

This is such a cute piece, loved the expression of craving/longing throughout this poem.. great job