Never Felt This Way Before

by Jenni Marie   Nov 12, 2007


Spite gleaming within these eyes
Rage coursing through these veins
Thinking constantly of revenge
Beginning to feel so insane

Picturing your complete destruction
has become my favorite fantasy
One day soon, I'll unleash this wrath
And set this uncontrollable anger free

After everything we've been through
Never thought that it would end in hate
With every cruel thing you said or did
You unknowingly chose your fate

Never thought I'd let anger consume me
Never felt such strong hatred before
Become something unrecognizable
And every day I hate you even more.

Now the end is finally drawing near
Going to enjoy watching you cry
So you keep smirking and laughing
But darling, your destruction is nigh

**For A Contest**

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  • 16 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    I deffinitly love it. all the emotion in it runs through me. it is a little angry, but i feel as if ni could relate to it. if you read mine you'll understand.

    okay enough of my opinion... this poem is very bitter. i think if you wrote about how the cruel words affected you, like you described how it hurt youre soul it wouldve been cool. even w/o that, its amazing...
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I could feel your rage here. The emotion was intense. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    Great poem,, It flowed nicely.. But I just felt the emotion not too strong,, I mean the last stanza.. The other stanzas, they were strong and powerful,, And you use nice words to wrote this nice poem.. It was a great poem...
    Well done,,
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Picturing your complete destruction
    has become my favorite fantasy
    One day soon, I'll unleash this wrath
    And set this uncontrollable anger free

    ^I loved that stanza, It was my favorite of them all because it held so much emotion written deep within and showed how damn angry you were portrayed to be.

    The flow was beautiful I love that about your poems they always have this smoothe almost chant like flow which captures me and keeps me in a trace.

    The word choice! Again I always love your word choice. You pick jut the right words. Never too simple and never overly done which creates a gorgeous poem.

    A favorite from you definitly. It was amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    A bit chilling. Nicely written.
    Good luck in the contest.

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