by Jenni Marie Nov 12, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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Spite gleaming within these eyes |
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I deffinitly love it. all the emotion in it runs through me. it is a little angry, but i feel as if ni could relate to it. if you read mine you'll understand. |
by Gasttlee
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I could feel your rage here. The emotion was intense. 5/5 |
by unknown
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Great poem,, It flowed nicely.. But I just felt the emotion not too strong,, I mean the last stanza.. The other stanzas, they were strong and powerful,, And you use nice words to wrote this nice poem.. It was a great poem... |
by Melpomene
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Picturing your complete destruction |
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A bit chilling. Nicely written. |