Only If I Could Rewind

by End Of Eternity   Nov 12, 2007


Feeling roses for the first time
Like a child lying on sand
Feeling love for the first time
With the touch of your hand

Tears falling on my numb face
From the eyes i always adored
Fake promises being repeated
Until my dead heart is cured

If i could rise from my grave
Scream my hidden feelings
Only if i could ever rewind
And taste my own healing

Feels good to reach the end
Drowning in lake of memories
Spitting tears on so called friend
Compensating my fading feelings

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  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Touching poem very well written xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "Feeling roses for the first time
    Like a child lying on sand
    Feeling love for the first time
    With the touch of your hand"

    Those lines were the most impressive. You expressed plenty of love and feeling here and it made the rest of the poem flow so smoothly. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    A great write my friend. it is very touching. nice flow. a 5/5 from me. all the best of wishes ben thompson

  • 16 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Hi Nitin

    how r u???????? i know i hav visited after a long time....
    but really ur poems made me recall those days wen i used to write poems..... again m speechless as b4...i always aprreciate ur poems...
    and this 1 is too gud....

    ab soch rahi hoon main bhi fir se start kar doon poems likhna.....hehehehe

  • 16 years ago

    by xIxNeedxHimxLikexThexOceanxNeedsxThexTidesx is Engaged

    Wow.. Beautifuly written! 5\5 for sure.

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