Emo Smiles

by FlawlesslyTarnished   Nov 18, 2007


She hides behind her emo smiles
And covers her tears with a deceitful mask
She hides her sorrow through her laughter
Awaiting the day, she will finally crash

Her inside decays discretely
With no sign of her reluctant wilt
No one tries to see her truly
Or hears the emotions she has spilt

No one listens to her cries for help
No one sees the coldness that withers her away
No one pays attention to her silent tears
&& no one understands the pain she keeps inside by day

A secret this is kept to be
Not a word of it she speaks
She sees no point to burden others
When things are clearly bleak

She'll let herself decease so slow
For nothing is worthwhile
She'll cover her remorse with lies
As she hides behind her emo smiles

© 2007 WilTED.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jo Anna EL

    This was very sad to read.But the title juat brings it out..Emo smiles is very original.

    She hides behind her emo smiles
    And covers her tears with a deceitful mask
    She hides her sorrow through her laughter
    Awaiting the day, she will finally crash

    I related to this verse so much.Because constantly i feel like dying and when i read this i knew it would be good.Just as your others...
    ~Jo Anna EL

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Another one of your great poems. Out of the whole poem, my favorite stanza was the first one since it says about the girl hiding her real feelings. You did a great job. 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    This poem i can say that im that girl cause i have so much things that i have been through but i hide behind being funny i guess i try to find some good
    in it....but i guess its easier to cover your problems than face them...great poem!!

  • 16 years ago

    by meandhim080307

    I really liked this poem, mainly because i can completely relate to it. there were numerous lines that stood out to me, that i thought were wonderful lines that connected into the poem. great job, i loved it.
    5*5
    Kimberly

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked it...
    I think that here and there
    there were some flow issues
    but that's easily fixed
    I loved the message
    4.5/5

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