My heart and soul

Stunning, no other words could come close to describe this. just stunning.

5/5 David

Wow wow wow
very lovely sweet poem, it touched my heart, i am happy that i didn't read it until now because i know more about you now and so i can feel what you feel

take care Ingrid
my big sis

"Never had I felt an attraction this strong
You took my heart so fast...
In an instant I knew where I belong
and I pray for our love to forever last"

These lines hit me the most because they reminded me of a love I once had and it just brought back memories. The whole poem reflected what love is about overall. It was just wonderful. 5/5

Very sad romantic poem Ingrid....nice rhyme and flow....

"And as we both fight to survive
parted only in the flesh
Our bond is what keeps us alive
In our hearts our love remains forever fresh "

^how sad to be apart from the one we love....I relate to this verse only too well....very beautiful verses from you....Take care, Debbie

Aww i love that last line it ends the poem beautifully with a sense of hope that can last forever, great piece darls xox sam