1180 Emails

by Goran Rahim   Dec 14, 2007


Last night
I heard
We completed our 1180 emails
In two months
Yet
For us it is not much
While for readers
It may sound tons.

Baby,
Each word of those emails
Is a message from heart.
Showing how much
I love you.

Each time I press send
Of a new email
It shows
I cannot live without you.

My angel,
Reading your emails
You make me smile
Each moment.

People around me
Thinks I lost my mind
Laughing to myself,
They don’t know
It is the email
That you sent.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This poem was Mad adorable, goran!
    jeeze. The tittle stood out, and was sweet in itself. I love how you ended the piece.. it made me smile.
    Awesome job,
    Keep it up.
    5/5-- Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    This is a very beautiful poem Goran. I actually thought I had commented on it before, but I guess I didn't. : ) I have been down this same road before all the emails and the phone calls, etc. I have told you before my friend that are just brilliant when it comes to poetry; and reading this proves my point. Your writing is immaculate. The flow is always smooth and easy to follow. I wish you luck on all your book publishing's also. Keep up the excellent work!

    Letty

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    First off the title is freaking awesome. Lol. It really stood out and made me want to read it. the story behind it is sweet and well written. These lines were amazing-
    People around me
    Thinks I lost my mind
    Laughing to myself,
    They don't know
    It is the email
    That you sent.

    Again, I can relate to this and it makes me smile every time I read the lines. Great job :]]

    Amber :]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderful write as always. I enjoyed it. The flow and structure was good. I can relate to this and I'm sure many others could as well. Great write. This reminded me of the movie The Notebook. Again great write.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ruiz

    This is too cute