Nothing left to fear

by Krysten   Jan 4, 2008


In a flurry, a whirlwind
being tossed from side to side
no say so in the matter
just along for the painful ride

confused, scared and alone
screams suppressed by her own hand
terrified of what my happen
if she trys again

broken and shattered
completely beyond repair
she smells that bitter sweet smell
of looming death in the air

pained and hurt time after time
too many tears she shed
to much to take it anymore
to much blood shes bled

dirty, battered and beaten
to weak to try and survive
thrown into this self created hell
no long worth the effort to stay alive

she smiles this crooked smile
knowing her time is near
all her pain is washed away
nothing left to fear

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  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I can feel the emotions through the whole poem.. there is a few mis spellings, but other than that its a great poem.. i can relate to this one alot.. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Syndicate

    Whao. That was fantastic..and truly inspiring. The flow was smooth and the message clear. You really know how to draw an audience! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Very interesting piece! the whole lines had really expressed those deep thoughts and its kinda filled of deep emotions.. there are just few lines that u have to check about the spelling i think but all over the poems still great 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I really love the title and it's brilliantly written. Love your wordage...
    You must have talent!!!
    Great poem...
    5/5 for sure

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "confused, scared and alone
    screams suppressed by her own hand
    terrified of what my happen
    if she trys again"

    I loved the whole poem, but I felt these lines had more detail. It was explicit and the way you organized it made them so deep! 5/5

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