What is it?

by xxTaegan Emilyxx   Jan 6, 2008


Love is watching her from afar,
You could go up and kiss her lips
But its better when she doesn't think
your watching her swing her hips

Love is telling her shes beautiful
when she has shed some tears
and her eyes are red and puffy
wearing those trackies shes had for years

Love is running to her house,
When its pouring rain,
Because you want to hug her,
When she is in pain.

Love is not being afraid
To let your feelings show
Telling her you love her
So that she knows.

** just a quick one to get it out (AGAIN) lol.

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  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Too bad all guys arent like this right??
    amazing and beautifull expressed. i totally pictured a guy running in the rain to come see me!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Your description of love is amazing, you are an amazing poem. i loved the first stanza, it was so perfect, it was uncanny.

    5/5 david

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the beginning! It really captured my attention. But the last stanza was a bit weak and I think you could improve it. Overall great poem *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    So sweet and beautiful love piece, filled with greatly expressed feelings. This is my favorite poem from you, it is fantastically written and it has great and meaningful message. I like the descriptions- the imagery is very vivid from the beginning to the end, and whole idea for this poem is interesting and good.

    Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Oh what is it? hmm just trying to figure out about the titled of this poem.. but the message seems so lovely and beautiful.. great job 5/5

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