I'm Hard.

by Teria   Jan 7, 2008


I'm Hard.

Childish ways support my background.
for I'm trying to block out every sound.
I've decided not to take it too seriously,
for there's too much to handle dealing with me.

I'll burn the pictures, burn every book.
I'll burn the clothes with one last look.
While standing there naked, completely bare,
with slang words thrown, I won't even care.

For, I'm hard as a rock and my stomach's real tight.
I'm deciding to finally win this orgasmick fight.
I'll get started at the slowest speed, increasing in time. . .
For, I'm in no hurry to begin to define -

The life I'm living that seems but a lie -
I've done it over and over, all I do is try.
But, i can't seem to figure out what went wrong,
so I'll stand here hard all night long.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

    Awsome poem girl! It is rather easy for me to relate to at the moment. I really like the last stanza....
    The life I'm living that seems but a lie -
    I've done it over and over, all I do is try.
    But, i can't seem to figure out what went wrong,
    so I'll stand here hard all night long.

    I'm still trying to figure out what went wrong in my life that I haven't fixed yet. :(

    Anyway, great piece of work and you expressed yourself very throughly in this piece. I could sense the confusion and frustration in it. 5/5 as always ;) Keep writing, I love your poetry :)

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem is very true when it comes to many of our lives. its crazi bout how perfect this poem is. my fav stanza is

    The life I'm living that seems but a lie -
    I've done it over and over, all I do is try.
    But, i can't seem to figure out what went wrong,
    so I'll stand here hard all night long

    i dont know how, but this was rlly perfect

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Good poem, but the flow was a bit off. I loved the rhyming though. That's probably the best thing in the whole poem. Other than that, it was a bit off. Good job though.

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Riley

    This was pretty well written. I don't care much for some of the rhyming in the first stanza, but that didn't interrupt the flow, which is good.

    Although I have to say that I didn't know the main idea/theme of the poem until after the second stanza, maybe if you spread your ideas a bit more throughout the verses without getting out of chronological order.

  • 16 years ago

    by Riley

    This was pretty well written. I don't care much for some of the rhyming in the first stanza, but that didn't interrupt the flow, which is good.

    Although I have to say that I didn't know the main idea/theme of the poem until after the second stanza, maybe if you spread your ideas a bit more throughout the verses without getting out of chronological order.

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