Cries for rain

by damont   Jan 8, 2008


In the middle of the skies cries
tears drops from its bloody eyes
seeps down into the pits of jail
and looks upon the hearts that fail
the sun can't hear there cries
nor the moon there thoughts
they wait in sight
of water to feel alive
a plead is heard through the sound of wailing
and a voice of many words keep sailing
an understanding of gathering is met
the sky blood stans the ground
and tears from a broken heart begins to drown
the screaming of pain
and silence falls on the strain
when the rain stops
all thats left is an empty shell
until the rain comes again

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is a lovely poem, damont
    heartfelt, strong and pure.
    i really like the flow of the poem, your style of writing happens to be a type that i paricuarly love
    keep writing your doing a great job
    Sarah -xo

  • 16 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    Amazing job...very well writen and has good flow 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Aw. that's pretty.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    I love this poem! It was so well written, and I loved the message. Thank you for the comment on my poem. As to your question... yes sorta. mainly the last stanza... but the rest worked.

  • 16 years ago

    by Milo

    Amazing yet simple; my kind of poems

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