I'm Crazy About You

by White Chocolate Dynamite   Feb 3, 2008


Alisson,

I'm absolutely crazy about you,
I think about you all the time.
This is something definately new,
I feel like I could be with you for a lifetime.

I love the way your eyes are green,
You are the true meaning of life.
Im just not making this into a scene,
What we have is something better than life.

You might think im weird,
And you might feel the same way.
I think everything now has appeared,
Please lets not drift away!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    The poem was indeed filled with love but I believe you could have added much more depth i do not mean this as an insult, i truly did like your poem 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Oh,this is so nice!

  • 16 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    I'll probably get shot for this but hey, what the hell: AWWWWW~
    It's such a short, sweet, cute poem, I can't help but give this a 5. The emotion is just awe-inspiringly abundant, brilliant work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Good poem. I could definitely tell you wrote it about someone real, who you really care about. The flow was a bit off, and word choice was light but the emotion and images in this were a great read. Keep it up. [: I loved it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Aww very very cute.. its obvious you have true feelings for this allison girl.. and you did a great job putting it to words.. very nice job! i loved it and it was really sweet and filled with your emotion.. great job and keep it up ! =)

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