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One last cry...

These feeling i have for you,
Are fading away really fast...

You would think I would run out of tears,
As much as you make my cry...

Promise me you won't forget me,
Remember me as the girl, who's heart you broke...

Can't you see that I'm slipping.
I'm starting to drift away...

The sun is soon to set,
Yet your spirit is so alive...

This is goodbye my love,
I'll be the first one to let go...

Why must you do this to me?
Play these childish games...

Falling sky, grows darker everyday
Blue lights fading as I slip away...

I knew you were my hero,
You're everything I'll ever need...

Tanka
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