Can people please comment on my poems?
I'll return the favor...

Babe don't make promises you can't keep

There's never a forever baby

&& theres this gurl i know. who loves and trusts a guy way to much ... but they caint be together. she caint find her way to him.

She's just this girl
With a look in her eyes
That screams,
"I'm sorry for my mistakes!"

If i'm not worth you're tears, You shouldnt be worth mine.
I'm sorry baby, forever was a lie.

I Rather Cut Myself... For The Pain You Brought Me In To...

Loving you was the worst part.

Forgetting the way i love you
will be the hardest part.

Good-bye forever