I was wrong wen i fell fr yu,
i was wrong wen yu left n i cried fr yu,
i was wrong wen i cudnt let yu go,
i was wrong wen i let yu take over me,
i was always wrong ...

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The last of my memories will stay with you
So please don't come and give them back

After 4 years dad i've finally realized...,
its not my fault , its not my fault you left us without a look back .you had told me when i was little that you'd always be there......but i guess that was just another lie :(

I miss you!
I Love you!
I hate you!
I hurt you!
I save you!
I bite you!
I kill you!
but you killed me first.

The owl sits perched on his window,
Showing there's soon to be a widow.
Chills run through his body
Knowing that nobody
Will come to his aid
As his debts are not paid
And for the owl, now on his shoulder.

Whispering her blessing,
asking him to spare her,
as he is gently caressing
her soft, golden shoulder

An innocent child's breath,
taken away all too soon,
as their father steps away,
wielding a spoon.

Although the wind is blowing hard,
You still have one last card,
This card is life or death,
So, you plead the fifth.

I'm addicted.
The taste of the cocaine at the back of my throat, is all that I have.
It's everything I need.
You don't need me, and neither do the others.
So i'll have a line, sit back and feel the happy tingles through my body.