Hey everyone,
can yew please comment on my poem
little child its about child abuse and it
really would mean alot to me

You Will Never Know How Much Pain I Hold...Because Of This Smile....

Life Is Lost In Time Just As Tears In Rain...

I Slide Thy Blade Across My Wrist And Hope For Better Things...That Tomorrow Can Not Bring.

"Cuando amor no es locura, no es amor"
When love is not madness, it is not love.

And now i'm slowly fading
my heart is breaking
you're killing me
it hurts
but what can i do
you want her not me
i'm just not good enough for you..

Everytime i see you with her
i feel the pain come back
it hurts so bad
but everytime i dont see you
it hurts even more...

You're killing me
but you don't even know it
i'm breaking down
but you don't even care

I wish i could say that i didn't care
when i saw you kiss her
but then i'd just be lieng...

I saw you kiss her
and everything inside of me hurt
it was like i was being stabbed in the heart
i wish i didnt see that
but i did
and now thats all i see when i look at you
and im dying inside
it hurts so bad..