I have one word...WOW! That was amazing man. I heard your words well, but FELT their meaning even more. It's hard to find good poetry now days but you do an excellent job. Love and Lust are hand in hand and i love how you point out how many people just say the words without feeling their true meaning. That end stanza was flawless. Great timing to end the poem and with perfect finality. (5/5) Only thing i see wrong is spelling errors but who cares, poetry is about passion and emotion not rules. Great job.
This poem had awesome vocabulary, and flowed so beautifully with a rhyme that was NOT forced, which is hard to come by these days. So many people force their rhymes, and I don't think you did that here. Which is great. XD Great poem, very well written.. 5/5