Hello sleepless night

by ChrisT   Aug 7, 2011


Hello sleepless night
good to see you again
bottomless pack of cigarets
glasses of water
unstoppable playlist
of songs that sound like me
hello sleepless night
you're always there
not so much for me
only because of me

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  • 11 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I relate to this piece and loved how you strapped the poem back and wrote something short and to the point. I am sure many readers will relate to this.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I've had a plenty nights like these. You worded this well :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. The wording was good and easy to understand. The flow was ok. It is short but you were able to get your point across so that's ok.

    Gave it a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    A poem so many can relate too. I love how you penned it with simple wording with a lot of impact. Good indeed

    Connie