This is so real and alive, sweet and sentimental. It shows with just a few minutes what one undergoes emotionally and how well that emotion can be expressed. Throughout this poem your voice is heard...another nice read.
This is so vividly amazing and so sweet. I see nothing that should ever be changed and even if I did, adding it would interrupt the beauty of this poem. Wonderful job and this is very well written. Each line is a masterpiece in itself.