Finally free
by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX May 6, 2016
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I hate how much i need you |
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9 years ago
This is very deep and straight coming from the heart. Cutting is a type of self mutilating that supposedly help dealing with the pain. It's heartbreaking. Take care of yourself and be blessed. People do love you.
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9 years ago
Thank you im doing alot better since i wrote this poem i was going through a dark time an still trying to deal with a family loss but things are looking up an im starting to feel alot better :)
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9 years agoby Ben Pickard
Hello Christy
I'll make a couple of points about this piece, both positive and negative. I'll get the bad out the way first!
This isn't a pleasing write for me to read personally, simply because I am aware how much you are and have been suffering recently - indeed, for a while now, so it upsets me to think you are feeling this low.
As far as the actual poem is concerned, I always quite like these unpolished little writes as they come from the heart which is what poetry is all about.
What was most hard-hitting was the acknowledgement of the joy felt when cutting so deep and feeling such pain - more joy, perhaps, than had been felt before.
Keep your head up Christy and pm me whenever,
All the very best
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9 years ago
by Brenda
Wow! This is really dark and intense! Extreme vivid imagery.
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9 years ago
Thank you for your comment i was going through a dark time but things are better now :)
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