Sisters Of The Sky (Rictameter)

by Meena Krish   Jun 8, 2016

She is
a lustrous flame
upon the evening sky
mortals go weak seeing this dame.
To touch to hold her, passionate hearts try
but her sultry kiss smolders men
and they all turn to dust,
a red hot love
She is.

Night Queen
maiden of lust,
charms the mood of mortals
with her ardent smile so serene.
She lures all even those who are brutal,
sowing a desire very strong
that none can free from this
dark beauty, the
Night Queen.

of the blue sky
hold this earth in their palms
reigning day and night from up high.
Those who seek to caress these maidens, fall
with a crushing heart as they die
tasting the cruel love
of these stunning


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  • 2 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Hi Meena,

    well it's been a while since I've been on here and it's nice to read something from you again, this write is simply beautiful...I love your word choice and form, it flows like glass when I read it, you imagery is spot on and was an absolute pleasure to read!!


  • 2 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judge Comment:

    Meena created a beautiful string of Rictameter's this week! I was blown away to be honest.

    I knew that this nature poem was going to be magical by the title alone and as I started reading, I was overjoyed.

    It has a Goddess purity to it, and just elegant. Full of mystical words and elegance.

    Wonderful nature poem!!

  • 2 years ago

    by GB

    Very interesting shape and content Meena.
    To some great extent it looks like Joseph's Star, I love that diamond shape very much!

    Piece of art.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard


    I was calling out to women like this in my dreams the other night and got rudely awoken by my wife punching me rather hard in the arm.....:)

    Wonderful piece, and wonderful imagery throughout.
    I like this form and will give it a go myself sometime.

    Take care and all the best


  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Meena, a beautiful poem filled with wondrous imagery. A calming piece made easier to read with the images within it.